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Blue Pencil: An Overview
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Goals of Blue Pencil
Documentation and Demonstration
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Thomas
J.
D.
Armbrecht
UW-Madison
Blue
Pencil
Genesis
and
goals
of
the
project
Blue
Pencil
demonstration
Evaluation
Plans
for
development
Questions
and
suggestions
Advantages:
Multiple
drafts,
done
over
time,
of
which
there
is
a
record
Students
learn
to
spot
errors,
evaluate
writing
Instructors
can
focus
on
content
as
well
as
mechanics
Final
version
less
tedious
to
correct
Possibility
for
intellectual
&
social
interaction
among
students
Disadvantages:
Students
feel
like
it’s
a
waste
of
time
Students
have
not
learned
to
be
effective
editors
Students
do
not
take
their
peers’
work
seriously
and
are
therefore
resistant
to
correcting
it
Grammar
and
spelling
of
French
difficult
because
of
“disconnect”
between
spoken
and
written
French
These
words
all
sound
exactly
the
same,
but
have
different
meanings:
Étais
=
était
=
étaient
(all
forms
of
verb
“être”)
Été
(noun,
“summer”)
Et
thé
(“and
tea”)
Liaison
and
elision
“squish”
words
together
Diacritical
marks,
gender
and
agreement,
irregularities
and
exceptions,
etc.
Maximize
“pros”
while
minimizing
“cons”
Get
students
to
realize
that
learning
and
writing
in
any
language
is
a
process
necessitating
multiple
revisions
Make
a
mechanical
process
faster,
easier,
and
more
fun
for
both
students
and
instructors
Avoid
difficulties
inherent
in
correcting
hard-copies
or
using
a
word
processor
(like
MS
Word)
Blue
Pencil
is
available
through
the
following
site:http://scholadev.doit.wisc.edu/bluepencil
Instructions
for
using
the
software:
(click
here)
If
you’d
like
to
try
the
software,
please
contact
Timmo
Dugdale
at
UW
Madison
Pre-
and
post-surveys
Beta
testing
with
two
students
Classroom
testing
in
a
course
about
French
cinema
Frequent
meetings
with
programmers
and
consultants
Version
2
of
the
software
(this
year…)
Blue
Pencil
is
available
through
the
following
site:http://scholadev.doit.wisc.edu/bluepencil
Instructions
for
using
the
software:
(click
here)
If
you’d
like
to
try
the
software,
please
contact
Timmo
Dugdale
at
UW
Madison
Blue
Pencil
is
available
through
the
following
site:http://scholadev.doit.wisc.edu/bluepencil
Instructions
for
using
the
software:
(click
here)
If
you’d
like
to
try
the
software,
please
contact
Timmo
Dugdale
at
UW
Madison
Blue
Pencil
is
available
through
the
following
site:http://scholadev.doit.wisc.edu/bluepencil
Instructions
for
using
the
software:
(click
here)
If
you’d
like
to
try
the
software,
please
contact
Timmo
Dugdale
at
UW
Madison
Pre-
and
post-surveys
Beta
testing
with
two
students
Classroom
testing
in
a
course
about
French
cinema
Frequent
meetings
with
programmers
and
consultants
Version
2
of
the
software
(this
year…)
Even
though
students
had
problems
using
the
tool
because
of
software
and
design
problems,
they
found
the
legend,
tagging,
comments,
and
statistics
helpful
Blue
Pencil
helped
students
identify
problems
with
their
writing
Students
saw
increased
value
in
peer
critiques
and
valued
the
feedback
they
received
Correct
errors
and
rectify
lacunae
in
the
software
2nd
round
of
beta
testing
and
classroom
deployment
Share
software
with
peers
and
colleagues
in
department
and
related
programs;
solicit
feedback
Consult
with
UW’s
Writing
Center
for
ideas/feedback
Add
social
networking
aspect
to
software
to
increase
communication,
effectiveness,
and
fun
I’d
like
to
hear
about:
Similar
software
available
in
your
institution
or
commercially
Experiences
integrating
social
networking
into
the
classroom
Ideas
you
might
have
Your
interest
in
the
software
Contact
information:
Thomas
Armbrecht
Associate
Professor
of
French,
UW-Madison
tjarmbrecht@wisc.edu
<or>
Timmo
Dugdale
Senior
Consultant,
Academic
Technology
timmo@doit.wisc.edu
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see
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technologically
friendly
technology
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Oregon
City
home
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did
see
pursued
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you
have
questions
about
its
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technologies
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you
social
policies
funded
and
developed
UW
Madison
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the
class
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you
got
to
because
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know
that
this
conversation
amongst
people
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.
so
.
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.
Sesno
which
probably
had
the
.
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be
very
informally
and
of
iTunes
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a
mind
presentation
will
necessarily
take
the
entire
time
Ancelotti
.
so
these
two
free
to
ask
questions
during
a
presentation
at
no
problem
with
that
whatsoever
.
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.
and
I
Let's
move
around
when
I
walk
so
on
.
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see
with
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unseeded
year
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and
mustaches
are
also
was
missing
.
and
it's
.
the
answers
.
Strossen
your
friend
.
so
I
is
is
this
his
twentieth
century
French
literature
up
.
we
have
a
large
Pricing
programming
in
French
so
generally
ends
up
language
instruction
its
steepest
up
taking
journalists
to
my
right
student
suspected
of
funding
.
so
most
of
my
own
technologically
.
oriented
projects
are
are
about
the
teaching
of
leaders
are
first
and
foremost
we
all
.
Louisiana
grammatical
on
its
words
straight
doing
it
up
.
one
of
the
terrorism
overall
.
listen
many
many
.
so
where
did
you
teach
and
research
projects
for
whatever
personal
need
in
frustration
was
the
motivator
.
and
that
is
namely
I'm
so
tired
of
correcting
the
same
general
words
which
students
only
needs
to
was
twenty
they
say
that
these
rights
are
and
they
often
don't
end
up
use
of
that
a
.
Shaw
But
on
that
region
that
were
seeing
here
.
so
I
have
been
losing
four
of
.
we
used
to
certain
minimize
or
an
officer
is
spread
the
wealth
of
of
of
.
drawings
and
as
soon
as
I
can
spend
more
time
on
commenting
on
content
students'
work
and
on
their
side
.
rather
than
simply
up
mechanical
errors
.
says
Lyman
.
the
and
and
I
also
think
this
is
incredibly
important
.
on
that
of
any
Technology
agrees
to
that
Classroom
must
have
of
pedagogical
goal
.
so
it
can
be
justices
.
should
we
be
also
two
.
this
is
the
students
to
about
not
close
to
something
that
they
cannot
do
integrating
the
classroom
or
to
a
better
more
easily
.
three
outside
experts
.
so
up
.
and
Overview
What
were
the
top
and
stay
home
.
I
mean
you
Strongly
your
Editing
and
and
I
feel
that's
that's
not
always
the
case
of
both
teachers
and
students
often
seen
as
a
waste
of
time
or
in
effect
will
saw
you
in
of
all
why
I
thought
it
was
.
of
.
so
.
true
writing
in
general
the
season
process
is
only
you
know
that
.
can
you
for
the
first
time
the
highest
professional
manner
create
have
no
idea
the
last
year
.
the
change
means
to
use
understands
this
of
women
in
writing
Michelin
language
of
peace
is
to
ultimately
testing
the
core
of
our
endeavors
to
teach
right
.
on
an
island
in
French
in
style
is
also
teaching
.
Oh
.
social
and
historical
context
of
the
leaders
are
dead
and
teaching
Very
in
the
Orange
percent
increase
that
he's
an
of
construction
period
so
that
also
involved
online
classes
of
seven
.
and
I
don't
.
minuses
are
not
necessarily
writing
is
not
the
sole
focus
on
its
own
twist
it
was
also
a
motivation
for
.
Kreis
was
to
associate
the
teaching
of
its
own
.
so
whatever
the
reason
Kerry
Editing
when
you
have
more
than
one
piece
presentation
writing
you
of
create
multiple
tracks
and
students
have
to
do
things
at
a
time
to
reconsider
it
.
it's
it's
essential
to
any
of
reading
endeavor
and
Very
are
asthma
students
to
refer
to
deny
for
a
day
.
.
also
today
shows
the
development
of
of
peace
because
you
have
several
copies
and
have
different
ideas
and
we're
students
are
responding
to
more
than
one
an
editor
one
teach
and
I
also
believe
that
that's
fair
.
why
.
I
instructors
can
see
the
development
of
that
.
writing
but
also
see
how
other
students
in
class
and
he
assignments
understand
writing
hundred
and
ten
.
so
I'm
record
.
Oh
.
when
writing
a
foreign
language
students
are
often
so
focused
on
the
detainees
are
difficult
and
there
to
try
to
see
some
intelligence
something
that
they
care
about
.
that's
a
hard
thing
to
mix
together
when
students
don't
master
language
and
very
often
they
cannot
see
there
.
we
all
had
a
reason
to
expect
from
me
.
Cooper
Your
own
writing
.
it's
much
much
worse
in
French
of
.
and
then
I
and
many
people
forget
is
that
.
says
agreement
O'Brien
High
School
on
based
on
the
handlers
of
how
to
evaluate
other
writing
.
and
I
means
that
in
order
to
the
effect
of
riders
you
have
to
be
somewhat
of
a
critic
of
and
so
here
Editing
teaches
a
person
of
two
that
were
pretty
close
and
can
always
you
and
also
from
available
Wednesday
.
and
I
needed
that
will
improve
her
is
a
up
.
so
who
has
a
server
for
a
to
Rouse
he
by
on
had
a
higher
calling
were
turned
PC
.
two
of
focus
on
content
and
not
just
mechanics
and
sometimes
up
to
a
UC
papers
one
eight
acres
have
.
yes
but
see
to
it
and
if
you
were
just
seventy
five
other
corrections
.
this
is
a
joke
which
is
hateful
.
the
of
.
and
so
the
Final
Version
and
I
received
after
he
sustained
pure
it
is
much
much
less
tedious
for
me
.
and
now
Spaniards
are
a
lot
of
maintaining
my
engagement
in
the
teaching
classes
that
have
not
the
same
subject
but
on
similar
types
of
assignments
as
an
seeing
some
places
word
that
you
see
that's
important
to
me
because
I
see
myself
getting
fatigued
enough
for
us
.
in
your
right
to
do
you
care
about
student
letting
it
all
that
for
me
this
is
really
in
question
.
.
the
end
of
this
is
an
aspect
of
the
of
the
and
then
those
interests
and
in
some
ways
iTunes
there
thus
far
the
least
developed
part
of
this
particular
project
and
to
police
up
about
it
.
discuss
.
you
are
is
the
loyal
and
possibilities
of
both
intellectual
and
social
interaction
among
students
and
between
students
and
instructors
up
in
writing
of
the
reasons
are
for
that
are
and
that's
own
.
I
don't
even
writing
is
a
very
personal
thing
leadership
and
he's
incredibly
personal
or
of
something
I
care
of
Terri
deeply
.
it's
that
matters
.
and
I
want
students
to
on
May
Similar
personal
investments
network
to
use
that
possible
.
and
I
think
they
are
making
it
harder
.
Canadians
are
there
my
experiences
to
their
foes
and
friends
those
are
all
things
that
happens
on
the
right
way
.
consistency
.
so
.
said
sure
and
yet
it's
but
it's
definitely
cool
.
there
are
definitely
Disadvantages
to
Peer
Editing
on
one
one
which
is
that
on
skis
.
as
I
said
are
often
quite
resistant
to
it
.
and
up
.
I'll
talk
about
of
how
of
the
of
the
.
this
product
was
development
practices
UW
Madison
of
creating
Instructions
software
unit
.
but
on
.
I
think
that
Joe
the
of
the
division
and
informational
technologies
known
as
to
its
own
is
very
good
and
that's
encouraging
reflect
its
up
creation
of
of
destruction
troops
and
a
home
.
they
don't
Pre
surveys
this
year
Goals
two
instructors
and
students
of
post
surveys
that
there
really
is
a
lot
of
feedback
are
going
to
mostly
reasons
and
prostitutes
.
but
he's
also
a
note
from
that
that
there
are
.
my
own
experience
as
well
.
often
students
are
not
seventies
be
one
of
its
work
.
they
don't
take
it
seriously
.
they
often
think
that
the
expense
of
focusing
on
their
own
work
and
so
they
tend
to
Peer
Editing
projects
for
critiques
of
and
that
also
needed
on
how
actually
to
be
effective
.
there
are
specific
challenges
when
it
comes
to
managing
our
Peer
Editing
in
a
foreign
language
and
French
and
particular
.
what
we
see
is
that
there
really
isn't
disconnect
between
spoken
French
and
written
each
other
and
you
stay
anywhere
and
you
know
example
it's
and
you
love
the
screen
here
.
always
words
.
he
using
the
do
it
in
the
south
students
.
of
how
you
teach
students
to
you
up
.
will
you
be
reading
the
reasons
Blair
is
a
challenge
but
when
arriving
there
students
has
made
a
lot
of
states
because
of
these
cops
on
and
they
don't
seem
them
when
they
read
it
sounds
.
s
.
um
.
this
is
all
the
same
for
they
also
say
.
on
up
.
what's
up
or
it's
.
he's
known
as
the
nation's
squish
words
together
.
Oh
I
don't
know
if
the
US
and
French
button
up
.
Presenting
articles
like
done
and
he
said
up
to
into
words
the
end
of
.
but
it's
pronounced
no
assists
for
one
word
again
something
is
difficulties
today's
they
find
up
to
their
experience
is
unique
in
the
state
errors
and
go
percent
Editing
up
your
many
challenges
right
chopsticks
.
ten
of
something
it's
also
very
difficult
for
students
to
understand
is
that
Diacritical
marks
actions
are
part
of
the
spelling
of
the
word
is
sort
of
the
difference
between
let's
say
where
he
is
and
how
s
he
can
to
go
we
only
words
.
but
enter
the
season
or
one
how
well
he
meetings
.
the
send
off
about
all
in
French
.
you
risk
of
ready
Users
said
.
and
home
soon
and
a
difficulties
for
students
to
see
because
the
toxins
themselves
are
not
always
intuitive
.
Users
for
speakers
.
.
so
he
does
.
on
of
the
project
or
an
address
program
called
the
teach
and
students
are
buying
.
and
these
are
of
grants
for
faculty
.
where
are
they
will
use
that
as
you
did
anyone
on
the
nature
of
the
trust
that
they're
proposing
.
the
five
hundred
and
two
thousand
dollars
in
research
funds
.
solicit
or
transferred
directly
into
my
research
.
combined
those
coffins
.
and
then
on
up
.
you
your
.
necessitates
that
they
will
find
that
of
and
that
it
provided
certain
number
of
hours
of
Development
and
sports
.
so
there
are
three
components
that
of
it
and
also
there's
a
social
aspect
to
them
to
the
case
for
a
license
where
Share
were
among
ourselves
up
to
twelve
years
.
there
is
one
reason
it's
so
long
one
of
the
the
the
context
of
this
upgrade
program
and
he's
up
he's
very
good
use
is
coming
to
my
students
to
development
of
Instructions
goals
by
two
of
my
into
the
iPhone
was
so
humid
poster
child
were
on
TV
.
that's
.
more
voters
or
as
I
.
he
the
answer
.
one
day
.
but
as
you
might
eight
.
podcasting
things
.
second
my
acceptance
here
last
year
.
tens
of
twenty
shooting
one
Now
are
we
.
it's
up
to
you
.
this
actually
was
under
a
of
a
Bruin
of
collaborative
for
its
products
.
get
students
to
collaborate
class
.
so
Lou
.
I've
seen
diesel
and
and
.
iTunes
is
the
sufferings
of
the
least
I
did
not
of
the
program
even
though
it's
up
to
was
nice
to
you
now
saying
and
I'm
sure
and
it's
it's
it's
the
only
it's
up
available
to
anyone
who
will
doc
on
own
.
but
I
did
ICDC
to
the
entire
thing
all
along
with
of
consultant
from
from
University
of
to
the
idea
of
an
experienced
Agree
Instructions
was
all
thanks
to
Engage
but
of
they
help
you
really
created
at
its
tip
.
.
again
we
goals
up
and
it's
my
heart
is
clear
that
it
isn't
pedagogical
goals
first
what
and
this
brings
to
students
and
years
.
how
is
it
any
easier
White
squall
.
but
I
do
try
very
hard
to
focus
on
a
quiet
thing
.
what
I
do
.
own
.
so
who
.
.
any
reason
being
we
talked
about
Pros
and
consular
Maximize
Pros
and
minimize
all
cons
don't
want
is
used
to
realize
that
learning
and
writing
language
use
for
home
a
day
of
the
necessities
multiple
revisions
.
the
G
seven
English
of
the
one
made
the
Peer
Editing
process
in
the
process
of
Corrections
in
general
are
much
easier
students
talk
about
up
.
you're
Editing
me
it's
my
classroom
in
a
moment
when
Street
software
for
.
.
actually
difficulties
that
are
in
the
um
bit
of
both
physically
or
twenty
million
to
the
side
doing
this
this
program
tonight
we
can
be
done
in
my
Software
up
.
but
I
hadn't
faced
two
.
Blue
and
the
software
people
then
were
treated
.
localized
and
Taylor
down
too
long
.
corrections
are
Line
which
specifically
the
use
English
course
to
.
so
these
are
common
feature
of
tracking
changes
in
the
sites
that
these
are
all
of
that
he
go
.
the
the
cross
of
this
program
cannot
be
buried
and
most
menus
if
you
know
they
were
in
search
stop
for
a
the
only
thing
this
text
.
minuses
of
the
learning
curve
for
the
software
itself
unlike
Mantra
software
which
is
quite
OK
.
.
so
.
and
so
is
available
through
this
science
is
not
really
up
.
available
to
everyone
.
although
editors
reasons
for
that
.
so
in
order
to
protect
students'
privacy
of
Canada's
own
.
tuition
and
he
really
something
that
is
not
problem
.
the
news
is
under
are
up
LMS
are
many
Mention
software
which
is
called
learning
UW
and
use
up
Howard
By
C
desires
are
.
so
it's
that
as
an
axis
of
the
states
of
the
project
is
leading
Each
protests
and
some
class
.
and
for
the
people
we
.
you
don't
use
Students
Ukraine
gas
that
is
something
the
real
interests
you
and
your
interest
in
learning
about
it
.
it's
about
tour
instead
opts
for
Editing
just
seems
.
all
I'm
very
sure
of
it
when
I
I
was
hearing
this
stuff
with
anyone
as
far
as
I'm
concerned
and
I
believe
that
of
doing
.
he's
also
passed
pretty
open
up
.
actually
when
it
comes
to
our
.
Sharon
technologies
for
another
Instructors
of
the
jury
marginally
you'd
like
to
know
is
that
you
just
.
it
is
for
personal
use
in
your
customers
to
send
my
mind
this
is
the
problem
.
Oh
.
there
is
not
available
for
the
reasons
I
said
it
also
cuts
Agree
the
use
of
search
legal
before
the
race
for
the
speech
.
you
see
this
as
I
said
.
the
launching
point
for
discussion
an
unusual
step
in
my
element
of
the
project
go
to
your
questions
will
up
to
some
ideas
.
so
Lou
this
by
the
way
I've
uploaded
this
presentation
.
so
all
over
you
see
the
available
to
you
.
it's
.
it
.
.
yes
Madison
now
is
when
I
click
on
the
Students
for
.
cool
.
.
well
Alessio
.
.
based
PCs
not
ideas
are
either
it's
really
just
I
have
deployed
is
some
talk
about
my
stepsister
going
to
testing
in
you'd
see
that
spanned
deploy
only
there
in
a
way
spot
.
.
.
so
it's
you
know
I
it
you
site
and
sign
in
with
their
ID
and
password
of
beta
PC
granted
access
to
go
to
designs
by
other
units
traitors
working
with
me
.
and
in
the
and
use
the
load
of
work
in
case
of
say
tonight
.
suggested
strongly
that
the
right
in
my
software
to
a
server
they're
not
you
need
issues
we
are
.
the
agency
now
entered
this
year
it's
not
System
know
despite
software
September
processing
software
.
Lou
after
the
original
drafts
done
on
them
.
although
the
Q
rating
at
its
two
year
US
teens
can
make
the
changes
under
word
processor
.
and
that's
when
the
action
it
might
skew
the
integration
between
for
the
purposes
that
they
use
and
on
and
content
.
so
I
don't
know
that
this
woman's
name
because
I
have
not
come
to
the
IR
.
this
is
a
.
this
is
Iraq
this
time
.
course
I'm
French
cinema
last
fall
of
Saddam's
own
new
ways
cinema
and
you
know
French
intersections
between
the
two
.
Audi
was
easy
for
a
double
class
which
means
that
is
a
a
juniors
and
seniors
.
of
course
have
parties
periods
writing
or
in
French
and
many
of
whom
are
still
UW
for
acts
of
peace
.
on
.
yes
I
and
so
was
the
Reds'
critical
tests
and
watch
the
films
on
we
were
also
reading
novels
and
I
was
asking
students
to
basically
take
the
three
elements
and
answer
all
of
that
.
Provide
.
so
what
happens
is
a
loser
in
this
case
.
Pasting
a
senior
and
then
home
the
first
thing
will
happen
is
that
home
today
.
either
she
or
he
instructors
chosen
will
review
the
text
and
you'd
seen
the
home
.
is
this
just
Camtasia
it
was
very
good
at
all
certain
price
.
she
actually
had
of
three
win
.
runner
up
your
editors
or
even
only
one
squad
.
so
she
thought
it
was
useful
enough
projects
or
or
process
that
she
went
beyond
which
already
has
a
great
site
.
so
she
knew
his
years
so
that
um
is
probably
the
greatest
possible
.
this
for
some
reason
it
was
.
no
idea
why
it
research
and
Turkey
the
first
pair
.
once
own
.
but
soon
she
would
up
.
Version
of
RSA
and
that
is
available
for
to
see
you
.
so
I
can
always
see
when
you
read
the
Version
.
yes
it
was
which
is
important
because
once
you
know
ensure
that
interaction
to
convince
errors
and
to
say
which
.
and
were
up
.
he
completed
the
assignments
or
rather
just
one
little
they
are
.
I
don't
want
to
correct
every
region
of
the
US
and
that's
part
of
the
goal
.
text
but
I
do
a
story
that
students
are
not
easy
advantage
of
Peer
Editing
process
to
mo
vaccinate
not
in
use
on
its
current
seven
thousand
twenty
.
.
.
.
Jamison
has
been
she
has
received
here
.
that's
going
on
here
she
was
herself
.
do
you
two
more
versions
of
the
essay
and
.
as
an
instructor
or
seven
days
a
them
.
see
she
you
up
to
.
she
she
made
that
this
is
a
twice
so
Stasi
has
signed
seriously
and
is
owned
is
allowing
and
sometimes
doing
that
actually
useful
information
to
know
if
somebody
turns
into
a
joke
.
but
try
the
harder
I
mean
it's
inhabitants
of
and
I'm
I
will
say
slightly
differently
and
I
would
advice
on
.
they
didn't
really
spend
much
time
it
crashed
.
so
.
she
made
questions
than
she
is
is
someone
else
to
pray
that
she
made
three
more
rounds
of
elections
and
then
using
a
stream
into
the
up
and
identify
over
.
we
solution
is
to
gray
.
by
the
way
the
fiery
other
forms
assignments
home
.
I
traded
on
the
screen
just
really
don't
saw
.
he
percent
use
content
and
that
opens
White
Yes
the
actual
Wallace
Yes
yes
itself
.
twenty
five
percent
use
tax
.
it's
a
history
that
they
use
in
the
fact
.
the
of
quality
yet
because
of
the
season
.
twenty
five
cents
or
was
of
the
Peer
Editing
process
today
spends
time
reading
their
years
of
projects
carefully
to
that
words
are
.
I
see
who
they
are
a
thousand
the
others
were
there
and
then
secondly
did
they
take
their
peers
predecessors
.
indeed
we
win
the
general
goes
by
her
editor
.
no
.
all
that
.
yes
.
the
dinner
online
.
he
for
.
yes
.
so
now
we
have
done
is
to
live
.
to
Windows
.
Sunday's
repeat
that
question
along
the
Florida
court
and
its
cast
of
the
question
was
on
a
sixteen
to
thirteen
years
any
wagers
.
compare
versions
of
the
NSA
and
leading
a
peaceful
solution
.
absolutely
.
although
it's
done
now
is
comparatively
low
tech
and
they
just
holding
its
clients
and
System
can
browse
secs
one
.
when
you
much
.
new
use
of
it
was
true
.
so
long
years
the
euro
is
at
sea
.
.
or
on
.
don't
go
in
the
and
dying
with
Hahn's
into
a
teaching
Peer
Editing
in
French
.
he
is
not
to
have
Students
major
corrections
for
the
author
of
the
documents
that
would
get
five
percent
although
there
is
an
error
and
that
is
that
he's
going
to
fight
that
I
of
or
that
it's
just
so
.
one
one
No
.
and
in
a
series
of
this
you
meetings
you
up
.
Cicinho
and
worsen
a
day
.
OK
.
position
your
cursor
over
up
to
tighten
their
Explain
what
I
mean
it's
so
course
he's
all
the
young
old
and
an
attack
on
his
watch
TV
with
a
college
for
.
spelling
Kong
.
the
problem
.
or
develops
to
see
his
hands
because
again
this
was
an
intense
level
class
.
and
of
this
is
just
a
search
software
.
.
so
will
we
see
so
actually
when
you
had
the
fortune
he
did
it
because
the
of
this
.
the
pieces
are
being
moved
right
now
the
editing
functions
or
yesterday
and
today
with
the
success
that
he's
going
to
stop
working
.
basically
now
works
.
so
what
and
when
you
when
you
write
something
.
there's
basically
a
week
email
.
Senator
box
.
many
listeners
are
quite
common
.
it
cs
little
box
and
it
has
since
and
who's
on
top
of
one
of
those
schools
that
are
specific
to
this
is
a
drop
down
menu
.
he's
the
terror
groups
.
co-written
same
way
.
so
as
soon
is
the
highlights
of
a
word
or
words
.
since
then
they
go
down
menu
and
select
the
type
of
error
it's
.
and
so
then
that
those
letters
are
highlighted
in
the
color
any
errors
a
genocide
server
example
it's
a
that's
she
is
still
the
word
.
there's
no
surge
which
is
not
installed
.
but
on
the
scene
had
already
she's
was
enough
to
be
highlighted
and
we
were
still
Correct
.
the
second
home
and
you
can
see
you
a
sense
.
so
.
Clancy
Some
stocks
.
and
I'm
saying
that
I
don't
like
the
construction
of
the
sentence
and
here
in
lies
the
problem
here
.
I'm
saying
that's
own
.
there's
incredible
carry
Larry
and
or
PRD
decisions
that
are
being
used
your
intentions
were
and
what
her
condition
.
she
notes
that
at
all
.
Oh
man
I
got
to
dry
by
crashing
here
because
it's
the
final
image
of
the
US
.
another
function
is
quite
useful
is
the
utility
yesterday
of
duty
to
answer
comments
up
.
you're
iTunes
Paxon
This
is
like
Microsoft
Word
a
seven
hour
all
those
lives
and
believes
his
side
which
is
you
have
allowed
opponents
to
me
incredibly
difficult
to
set
up
so
he
comes
in
goes
up
.
but
I
said
you
.
that's
a
great
sense
of
of
the
law
of
the
houses
site
from
text
the
job
.
it's
working
right
now
.
and
there's
another
feature
of
these
.
that
was
built
in
was
one
of
my
goals
.
Somers
Well
I
went
down
Agree
she
concludes
Agree
.
Comment
feature
of
four
.
my
degree
Systems
fine
reaction
.
so
I
remember
I
read
a
small
aircraft
it
said
it's
wonderful
.
her
human
cells
.
Sean
to
get
out
without
with
Rooney
.
the
win
done
in
a
that
you
used
to
send
your
sources
but
it's
.
Saddam
is
as
I
use
to
create
statistics
based
on
a
number
of
times
here
codes
were
slight
.
so
and
the
reason
I
listened
is
this
woman
writes
very
well
and
in
one
show
use
of
of
of
Korea
and
working
as
cents
at
not
editors
to
the
IRB
and
it's
not
as
Anonymous
.
should
he
.
I
know
that
is
what
this
woman
has
some
work
in
another
species
Camtasia
eighteen
to
eight
.
Ah
.
anyway
.
we
see
that
.
can
we
infer
from
this
example
but
that
didn't
and
Young
three
.
Calum
win
since
the
errors
that
she
does
be
it
.
gender
.
it's
getting
there
generally
isn't
an
issue
for
her
she's
lived
all
over
is
our
expert
in
that
sense
.
this
is
actually
a
very
useful
the
cost
.
and
the
reason
being
is
that
in
the
lower
level
classes
.
when
students
are
reading
a
foreign
language
.
and
they
they
.
team
USA
.
I
can't
I
do
not
know
what
you
might
know
where
to
start
.
you
know
I
Sony
the
Sensex
only
problems
in
French
.
the
overlaps
.
and
this
year
and
a
mechanical
.
is
this
tabulation
of
statistics
policies
to
say
you
know
what
.
and
and
it
is
between
the
AL
leaders
in
the
past
.
well
I
don't
really
need
to
worry
too
much
.
Mueller
I
can't
spell
an
end
.
I
had
a
better
sense
in
the
nation
.
those
were
the
single
nation
of
errors
and
again
your
nation
of
the
state
agency
on
or
doing
anything
also
compare
up
.
they
there
.
Mahdi
.
Kenyan
of
their
syntax
please
their
characters
and
I
and
her
team
of
.
and
so
it
helps
them
a
huge
success
in
Version
and
also
on
the
test
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least
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steps
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know
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software
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swing
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night
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best
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software
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event
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talk
about
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considerable
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moments
then
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asked
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volunteers
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software
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the
class
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keep
away
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next
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reasons
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skaters
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her
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ever
win
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required
to
use
that
as
the
software
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or
three
issues
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work
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you
can
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.
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about
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Center
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home
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spring
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software
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helpful
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require
them
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surveys
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people
that
not
on
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percent
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yes
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then
they
said
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know
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research
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work
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watch
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idea
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errors
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errors
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major
poll
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information
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and
off
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really
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case
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my
meeting
comments
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don't
allow
that
person
felt
about
that
today
word
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teacher
was
use
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can
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work
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did
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city
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herself
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himself
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software
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let's
features
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that
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though
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interesting
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offer
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doubt
that
identify
particular
types
of
errors
in
the
writing
and
eighteen
seat
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a
marked
increase
in
their
perceived
value
of
of
of
your
seats
and
.
and
I
can
tell
you
from
our
own
observations
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you
reading
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substantially
better
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less
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to
correct
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so
that
part
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it
was
definitely
a
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spend
more
time
writing
about
what
their
work
rather
than
just
racing
style
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will
hear
you
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with
this
idea
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.
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class
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surveys
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next
version
of
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acceded
to
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suffer
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top
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think
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like
him
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process
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processing
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election
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operation
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increase
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question
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the
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face
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nice
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site
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know
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errors
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number
of
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use
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more
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and
easy
to
correct
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stopped
and
had
another
name
in
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the
number
of
senators
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had
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you
can
actually
see
here
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gray
based
on
that
and
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very
convenient
or
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up
so
I
don't
do
that
now
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prefer
the
more
touching
humans
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then
testified
that
on
some
things
on
but
so
one
could
.
.
so
you
time
and
speed
along
so
Plans
for
Development
operates
.
errors
and
there
you
are
only
heroes
that
I
want
to
bring
it
up
so
I
was
a
long
list
of
error
codes
that
you
can
buy
five
in
understanding
in
their
assessments
of
their
mechanics
of
their
peers
.
on
the
a
second
round
of
beta
testing
and
classroom
deployment
limited
class
and
women
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software
with
my
two
years
.
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certainly
and
certainly
as
solicit
their
feedback
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formalized
process
and
also
threw
up
colleagues
calling
for
action
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re
right
.
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friends
up
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work
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writing
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talented
man
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very
technologically
savvy
friendly
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he
wants
the
software
and
I
know
the
feeling
of
the
developments
on
.
the
last
part
of
the
nation
doing
is
adding
a
little
fun
aspect
to
the
software
I
want
students
to
be
able
to
talk
about
the
process
of
writing
.
it's
you
media
types
.
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a
and
younger
use
this
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said
whatever
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.
on
Saturday
and
made
writing
a
personal
endeavor
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their
feelings
about
it
and
make
it
harder
of
their
lives
rather
than
just
simply
inside
.
it's
cs
.
that's
the
word
that
hadn't
yet
quite
up
to
an
ongoing
to
try
to
introduce
in
a
second
version
of
the
software
and
more
and
and
when
you
break
away
so
that
people
Each
that
could
use
the
software
.
home
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looking
piece
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treats
other
things
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creating
those
those
programs
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it's
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itself
in
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incidents
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so
we
will
increase
even
PC
and
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to
the
station
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on
effectiveness
of
the
of
of
what
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asking
and
you're
really
likes
me
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is
the
finest
possible
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tedious
.
so
.
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read
it
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good
lessons
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the
dots
in
your
interest
in
hearing
about
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you
have
.
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mean
I
cannot
the
first
person
who
thought
so
obviously
wrong
.
if
you
have
encountered
a
similar
software
.
um
if
you're
interested
in
working
with
yourself
online
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he
is
et-cetera
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this
is
my
contact
information
but
if
you
look
familiar
to
us
a
of
my
coaching
.
so
you've
seen
the
tide
in
the
race
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challenge
you
to
audiences
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the
picture
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Dugdale
is
the
senior
consultants
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dollars
project
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not
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who
own
way
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twenty
access
to
its
and
the
answer
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technological
aspect
were
the
ministries
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the
conceptual
art
were
the
actual
classroom
deployment
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hear
you
.
the
other
aspects
that
would
ease
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but
you
may
critiques
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so
and
so
that's
a
lie
presentation
and
the
the
discussions
or
questions
and
two
minutes
he
left
a
written
test
.
the
.
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good
.
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.
yes
.
I
know
I
actually
managers
that
there
was
two
things
.
it
was
a
challenge
students
.
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I
French
Reds
real
option
.
so
problems
in
my
state
is
that
right
Judy
.
written
language
.
I
guess
reading
fortunately
for
students
is
not
.
interesting
.
.
it's
quite
hard
.
re
standing
by
here
they
are
there
any
is
loose
in
the
entertainment
.
it
is
.
so
the
reason
was
that
you
know
this
is
based
in
French
.
the
issues
.
they
are
us
.
it's
really
true
.
there
is
a
course
increased
level
of
the
Studio
foreign
language
.
however
most
students
that
I
because
I
need
help
for
students
of
contagion
for
competing
lines
of
six
Masters
by
six
Masters
.
there
are
to
use
the
language
that
some
of
his
the
many
letters
and
oh
they're
not
using
the
word
for
iTunes
cs
.
yes
.
so
go
with
it
.
and
they
want
.
you
know
what
.
cons
.
they
will
.
she
.
yes
.
solution
.
the
twenty
might
be
.
the
second
on
the
issue
.
.
.
what
the
particular
time
.
.
.
.
she
.
yes
.
so
.
no
no
.
also
in
the
software
tool
use
and
what
is
the
most
appropriate
.
question
This
is
where
I
is
a
the
ideal
.
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rely
on
and
on
to
a
PC
stocks
you
own
a
is
it's
only
because
this
is
all
this
.
sigh
.
we
had
talked
about
.
who
was
the
site
.
he's
and
this
is
what
we
do
our
Qaeda
.
the
software
editors
the
text
editor
.
O'Sullivan
stations
and
one
was
going
to
do
is
you
of
the
software
.
outside
of
the
higher
education
.
context
and
I
agree
with
me
on
students
sometimes
are
.
Americans
use
my
you
know
of
Pre
before
lunch
and
she
knew
very
resistant
to
the
idea
Grammar
.
they
said
these
candidates
stand
is
born
when
their
own
.
so
there
is
a
necessary
one
against
Grammar
in
order
to
maintain
his
of
correction
of
so
sensitized
his
nation
today
.
they
understand
what
she
was
freezing
so
that
intensify
tensions
errors
.
time
yes
.
he's
huge
reason
why
lawyers
of
all
I
was
talking
about
I'm
sorry
.
his
last
twenty
minutes
.
.
.
.
so
the
racers
led
gray
here
.
I
was
on
the
streets
.
no
it's
standard
.